Comments for carolee bennett sherwood

Comment on expected to mourn: napowrimo 3 by jillypoet

jillypoet — Wed, 04 Apr 2012 14:16:12 +0000

lovely. asking her to write a wedding poem is the best poetry prompt, ever

Comment on stepping around the dead: napowrimo 2 by expected to mourn: napowrimo 3 | Albany Poets

expected to mourn: napowrimo 3 | Albany Poets — Wed, 04 Apr 2012 13:48:21 +0000

[...] today’s prompt from napowrimo.net is to write an epithalamium, a wedding poem. today’s prompt for Poetic Asides is to write a poem of apology/non-apology, which is funny because that’s what i ended up doing yesterday. [...]

Comment on stepping around the dead: napowrimo 2 by expected to mourn: napowrimo 3 « carolee bennett sherwood

expected to mourn: napowrimo 3 « carolee bennett sherwood — Wed, 04 Apr 2012 03:02:04 +0000

Comment on stepping around the dead: napowrimo 2 by Deb Scott

Deb Scott — Tue, 03 Apr 2012 15:36:23 +0000

I *loved* that story, and thought it was a decently made movie from the story/novella.

I’m happy to read you and cut you slack. Whatever gets you by.

And a glass of red wine, too. And a ginger cosmo. And…

Comment on her daring and her hesitate (napowrimo #1-ish) by Deb Scott

Deb Scott — Tue, 03 Apr 2012 15:33:06 +0000

No regrets, lady. Just string them together like this beauty when you can/want. Just like those split twinnings.

Great images.

Comment on her daring and her hesitate (napowrimo #1-ish) by maryfollowsthelamb

maryfollowsthelamb — Mon, 02 Apr 2012 03:06:29 +0000

When I first glanced at your picture, my first thought was, “She looks like Liza MInelli!”

Nice poem.

Comment on lips on the first syllable by Ginny Folger

Ginny Folger — Tue, 28 Feb 2012 06:00:33 +0000

Liked the poem very much…agree with the comments about the effective use of the refrain….I was interested also in the fact that I wrote a poem recently about crows roosting. Alas, (for me) I think your version is much better written

Comment on the sun, m-expletive f-expletive by Poetry + Prose, February 12 | Albany Poets

Poetry + Prose, February 12 | Albany Poets — Tue, 21 Feb 2012 15:02:40 +0000

[...] First one up was Bob Sharkey who said he had finished last year’s poem-a-day assignment, now on to a word-a-day, & so into “Another Deposition,” then to a piece about a confrontation at a party, “Benefit” (in honor of New York photographer Bill Cunningham) , then “Doctor Doctor.” Carolee was back after an absence with a new poem, “Crows on the 1st Cold Night of February,” then what I think is a first, read one of her Blog posts, “The Sun Mother-Fucker.” [...]

Comment on lips on the first syllable by Poetry + Prose, February 12 | Albany Poets

Poetry + Prose, February 12 | Albany Poets — Tue, 21 Feb 2012 14:50:34 +0000

[...] , then “Doctor Doctor.” Carolee was back after an absence with a new poem, “Crows on the 1st Cold Night of February,” then what I think is a first, read one of her Blog posts, “The Sun [...]

Comment on lips on the first syllable by James

James — Tue, 14 Feb 2012 19:15:36 +0000

I also like the way the refrain echoes away, like cawing fading as crows fly past. We only have three crows in our neighborhood so they’re not much for mobbing and they sound kind of lonely to me. Anyway, really strong poem here. Well done.